ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

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ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Mon Jun 18, 2012 5:53 pm

A bit of a teaser...

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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by captainuniverse » Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:28 pm

Nice! It definitely shows the cooperation of a joint police task force.

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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:34 pm

Trill? I thought it was the two-armed Edoan?
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Post by captainuniverse » Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:54 pm

I don't know. There was blood in my eyes and I had a shooting pain in my stomach from the phaser hit. I think it could have been a Jedi hater.
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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by amehatrekkie » Mon Jun 18, 2012 7:37 pm

dude that's beautiful :)
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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Thu Jun 21, 2012 2:07 am

And here's a better look at the logo alone:

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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Fri Jun 22, 2012 6:30 pm

Here's the "opening" for the story.

Try not to read it in Steven Zirnkilton's voice. :D
In the years since First Contact,
crimes by and against non-Intarans have become a minor,
yet politically-charged issue.

With the coming of the Federation,
an elite unit of Starfleet, Military and Civilian Security forces has been formed
to investigate these crimes wherever they occur within the Intar system.

This is the first of their stories.
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Post by captainuniverse » Fri Jun 22, 2012 8:50 pm

And that's when you hear the 'Law & Order' clicking sound. \Y/
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Post by CamSPD » Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:38 pm

Gong is more like it.
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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Sat Jun 23, 2012 1:39 am

You mean this?

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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:52 am

And here's the motorcycle jacket, as worn by the Citadel Police members of the Alien Investigations Squad:

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Post by captainuniverse » Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:17 pm

Nice jacket, John. I like the badge. (\gorn/)
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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:52 pm

Here's a closeup. The center contains the badge number. I don't think there are any variations (unlike most US cities, which issue different badges to detectives/sergeants/etc.), but I may change that later.

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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by AdmiralSirJohn » Sat Jun 23, 2012 2:57 pm

And here's the Citadel Police Department logo:

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Re: ST: CITADEL - "Law & Order"

Post by captainuniverse » Sat Jun 23, 2012 3:01 pm

Wow, I really like the alien language that you've created here, John. Let's hope Ikar never gets in trouble with the CPD. They don't have a cell small enough for her. LOL! \Y/
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